making our wings for our kites

this is my writting

I wasn’t sure what was in the box, but there was no way to open it with no key. So I went on an adventure through the forest lake and rivers I went through the forest with my heart beating like a alarm clock going off .There was moans and groans all through the forest with colossal sized snakes hissing. Then I saw the biggest tree I have ever seen with the treasure chest key on it. But there was the king of the jungle walking around it was a  lion. I got my gun and shot in to the air but he would not move. So I went closer and it was only a hologram .Then I stood forward without thinking of traps. So I fling up into the air I cut the rope I was hanging from. Then I got the key I went back to open the chest and it was another key in the treasure chest.    

Birds at Lochmara

This is my latest writing about the birds at Lochmara Lodge.

The Red Crow Kakariki bird is green with red on there head.

It smelt bad in the cage like bird poo.We saw turtles as big as Yertle the Turtle it felt like soft birds or like a Puppy Dog jumping on you . We put the food in our hand and they jumped on our hands and ate the food then the next group came in and we went out .