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Monday 12 November 2018

Pbl move to improve

why have you you chosen this project and what do you want to achive?
I have chosen this project because I like getting fit.i want to set a goal of getting fitter then I was before I stared.

I would like to do some running and trying to break my record for 3000 meters and keep breaking it

my goal for move to improve i want to improve my strength for rugby then people cant push me around and i can go through people.

somthing i am proud about myself is that i got 8 and a half laps in 12 mins

Wednesday 7 November 2018

free writing

As I was rolling down the highway in my custom r35 skyline I hear another car coming towards me but
it was hard to hear because of my loud turbo charged engine.But as the car got closer i could tell it was
a nissan silvia s15 custom.Next the guy in the silvia rolled down his window and i saw logan from my
high school that i went to he was my best friend.He looked at me and shouted
Caleb.So we pulled over and got out our custom cars and did our secret handshake and then did a back flip.Then we got to talk about what we have been up to since we last seen each other.Next I said so you trying to live up your dream with a skyline because I have I got an r35 liberty walk.Then he said yea i was but my house got robbed a couple weeks ago g they took all my money that was in my bank to.Next i felt so sorry for him so the next day I went to the car dealer and said do u have any r33 for sale and he said yes one more and I said ill have it. Then I went to liberty walk costom and said impress me it for my friend and they said it's in good hands so then I said to them and can u bring it on a truck delivery to 29 blankney street thank you and they said sure we can do that for you.So i called logan and said com around for a bbq and some cold beers so we eat and drink beers.Then we hear a big horn down the driveway and it was the delivery for logan's car he was so happy

Friday 26 October 2018

poem about wind

On that day my soul grew windward

'Wind!' chuckled I, 'Yes wind!'

Deep into that darkness walking

In a kingdom full of storms

I awoke and flung the twist

Wind - tormentor of my dreams

Much I marvelled the stink murmur

When I thought of the wind

Wednesday 24 October 2018

I’ll give you a sentence.  Then you have to take each word of that sentence
and write another whole sentence.
“With great power comes great responsibility”
With….the cat with the mouse ran inside.
Great…quick job done today great now to rest in the hot sun.
Power…brown long hair on a powerful woman with beautiful eyes.
Comes…foxes coming down from the hill to the pool.
Great…we jumped a great big jump and went into the pool.
Responsibility…


Example:
The quick brown fox jumped over the lazy dog
The forest was really scary when Julie and I went for a walk.  “Quick!”
I cried, “run faster!” Brown hair bobbing, Julie raced towards me.  Foxes were
everywhere, chasing us around the trees.  Jumped and scratched and twisted
and turned, we ran as fast as we could.  Over and over, I heard Julie call out,
“Wait for me!”  The silly girl was just so slow.  Lazy, that’s what mum calls her.
 Dogs barked nearby, scaring the foxes away – and finally, we were safe.



The pool was very cold.so we went in as quick as we could.but when we were running the lifeguard
with long brown hair told us to slow down and be careful because there are foxes living on the hill.we
got to the pool and we jumped in over the water.the lazy siren went on for some music to swim to.then
it stopped and a alarm for foxes came on but it was just some dogs running down the hill.

Friday 19 October 2018

fortnite gone wrong


It was a good day in the land of fortnight in lonely lodge.Then I heard a big bang and I seen fire in
the sky.I started to run to see what was happening so I could get an idea what to do.I start seeing
bodys everywhere of my team mates and all there lot on the ground.I pick up all there loot better
guns and mats.But i still didn't know what was wrong why my teammates where died and why
it was so quiet.Then I see a ship nothing I have ever seen before I go in and see one big green
monster it was bowser from mario.He was breathing so heavy and looked angry. Then i walked
closer well tried to but then I hit something I tried to catch it but it was too late it shattered on the
floor of the ship.He turned around looking at me steam coming out his nose like a dragon. He had
a mini gun in his hands and tried to kill me but then I remembered that I picked up my teammates
loot from before and had hid around the corner of Dusty Divit got my ar out in my hands and im
shaking so bad scared of dying.So I start to build trying to aim him up with my gun but he could
be aiming me up to so I thought to myself for my friends I will try to fight .So I start to shoot and
he shoots back and that's when I knew he hasn't been here before and I haved lived here all my
life.That's when I play smart and place traps and his health  gets lower and lower but then out of
nowhere i get shoot and my health is low.I am more scared for my life now.So I jump in the air
with my gun and do a 360 turn and shoot him in the face and kill him with a headshot and in big
letters it says you have saved fortnite battle royal thank you and fortnite lives happy ever after.

Monday 30 July 2018

chapter 7

  1. Which people in the group are starting to stand out as leaders, is this surprising? Why/why not?
  2. Do you think that taking Kevin’s dog Flip to Corries house was a mistake? Explain your thoughts.
  3. What does Lee mean when he says ‘we might have to make some ugly choices?’
  4. How is Ellie’s image of Kevin changing in this chapter?
  5. Is the decision to split into smaller groups a wise one? Give reasons
  6. Why is it that Elli’s group decides to act ‘illogically’ and survey the Showgrounds together?
  7. Why does the idea of a female soldier surprise Ellie?
  8. If your parents were captured in a situation like this, would they have been ‘sensible’, or would there have been violence?
  9. How is Ellie ‘transformed’ once she steps out from behind a tree near the
       Showgrounds?
  1. Ellie and Kevin’s quick-thinking allowed them to turn a ride-on lawnmower
       into a bomb. Was this moral behaviour? Did they do the right thing, or
       should they have surrendered themselves?

  1. Predict what you think has happened to Lee and Robyn.
chapter 5

  1. What does Corrie’s choice in career say about her character?fun and kind
  2. The group’s ability to avoid arguing with each other is rare- do you think that there would have been more drama if you and your friends went bush for a week?yes
  3. Why do you think Ellie and Lee feel uneasy just before their return to Wirrawee from the Bush?not sure
  4. What do you predict will await the group back home, why do you think this?becouse
chapter 6


  1. ho is the first person to really realise what is happening?hommer
  2. What is Ellie’s reaction to this person’s caution? Why do you think she reacts this way?
  3. How is the pace in this chapter different from the chapters before?the war is begening
  4. If you were in this situation, would you test the radio or not? Give reasons for your thinking
  5. Do you think the way the teenagers reacted to the realisation that Australia may have been invaded or at war was realistic? Why/why not
  6. What possible reasons exist that could spark war or invasion of Australia?
chapter 4


  1. Do you think the way they handled the snake incident was appropriate?no What could they have done differently?kill it
  2. Ellie claims that ‘Hell’ is only a label and that people label things all the time, often ignoring or overlooking certain labelled places or things. She then comes to the conclusion that ‘Hell was people’. Is she right? yesWhat’s your opinion, on labelling and Hell?it is happing alot around the world
  3. What was especially peculiar about the planes that flew over Hell? ‘Their ------, their ------, their----- frightened me.’ Do these characteristics have any significance?yes it can put fear in you
  4. Corrie and Kevin are the only couple in the group, but the trip was bound to bring friends closer. So why does Homer’s interest in Fi seem so odd to Ellie?not sure
  5. Fi brushes off the planes coming back from Commemoration Day. Why do you think the planes were flying over Wirrawee?war
  6. Robyn claims there were dozens and dozens of planes flying over them. What is Lee’s response? Is his suggestion resonable?
chapter 3


  1. Why does Robyn think they are the only people ever to have gone into Hell?becouse they havnt heard it before
  2. Why do you think the valley is called Hell?becouse of all the dangers
  3. Why must the teenagers seem like visitors from hell to the wild things living in the clearing? How is this ironic?im not sure
  4. What picture of Kevin do we get in this chapter?big
  5. What does Ellie liken Fi to? Do you think this is a fair assessment of her character. Use examples from the text to support your thinking
  6. At times Ellie switches her narration from retelling the story to commenting about her life in the present - why do you think the author has chosen to write in this style?so you can see where they have been and all the changes
chapter 2


  1. How did the group of teenagers ascend Tailors Stitch?with the land rover
  2. What are the two special events happening the day after the teenagers leave for the bush?not sure
  3. How many days were they planning on staying? How much food do you think is reasonable to bring, split between 7 teenagers?alot of food becouse you can eat anytime of the day
  4. Who is the Hermit and what is he supposed to have done? hut
  5. Do you think the Hermit will be significant to this story? Why/Why not?
  6. Is their decent down Satan’s Steps into Hell dangerous? Discuss what are the dangers, how could they have made it safer, what would you have done?the hill with the land rover and keeping the chain saw on is dangres
  7. Predict what the bridge signifies water
chapter 1


  1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of first person narration?you can only see it through her eyes  
  2. Why do you think Ellie needs to tell the story in chronological order?so you can see what is going to happen through the story
  3. Pick one interesting word from the chapter, find its meaning, and explain why it is interesting.the the means alot of things it can be the start of lots of titels and more. I chosse this word becouse it was the only word i could remember.
  4. John Marsden foreshadows several events and characters in this chapter. Make three predictions based on the evidence in the text about what may occur later in the story.
  5. What kind of story do you think Ellie is going to tell? Uses evidence from the text to support your answers.
  6. What set of skills do these characters have that convince their parents that they can ‘go bush’ independently. Find examples for three characters.

Thursday 21 June 2018

roman fight



Image result for colosseumImage result for colosseumLions tigers and all we have one warm up fight and then the big final with
Our worrier and our prisoner who was won XxII fights so this will be

it all end here so com pay v aureus

A very good fight come down and watch will this be his XxIII win or will
Image result for lions roman fightImage result for lions roman fight

Tuesday 15 May 2018

stone age tools intro

what problems did people face in the stone age: animals wanted to hurt the people
what food did they eat: fruits roots raw flesh
what was used to hunt food: stons rocks
what was difficult about using stones : to big and heavey
what did they do about this problem : shaped them into small and sharp
what kind of tools were used : hunting and to make more wepons
what type of tools could they when adding wood and stones together : pick axe spear arrow
what is an axe and pick axe used for: dinging and chop and to smash hard thingsImage result for stone age tools and weapons

Wednesday 9 May 2018

SEXXY Paragraphs

The film aspect close up was used effectively because you could see the dark red blood dripping
down his face.for instance you can see his blood dribbling down his sweaty face like he was in a
fight.we see this when the white guy is pointing a gun and he's scared and shaking.the dictator did
this to show the bad in the white and that black isnt bad.and how the white treat the black.the effect
of this was to try make you feel like you are in this situation or to feel like you want to help.this aspect
can be compared with a real life situation in a fight.




The film aspect close up was used cleverly because you can see what the director wants you to look
at.we see this when the camera focuses on the three girls and two of the girls are looking at the girl
in the middle.the dictator did this to make you look at the girl and her facial expressions.this made
the audience think that she was happy to see pk knock out a afracina.



This aspect can be compared to you doing something good in life and making other people around you feel happy.
The film aspect long shot was
used brilliant because we could see all the people around the arena even from the other side of the
arena.the director did this to make you see what is around pk and see how many people are
watching.the purpose of this was to think what he is feeling if you were in the arena.this effect was to
make you see that long shot was good to use in this situation.this aspect can be compared to u
standing in that arena like that and getting yelled at.
The film aspect close up was
used skillfully becomes you can see the blood in his nose and his eyebrow.the dictator did this to
see what kind of disappointment in pk and how you want to help him and fight again.the effect of this
was to focus on pk and want to see what kind of pain he is in.this made the addenace feel sad for pk
would want to help him up so he can get back at him.

what am i learning : im learning how to write good paragraphs really good and being abel to write more
and get high marks
how dose this work show my learning:it shows how i have progressed from last time i did this and
how much more it is better
what am i wondering: im wondering what kind of marks i will get and if my work is good for my standerds


Friday 4 May 2018

The time we saw power in the power of one

The film aspect longshot was used skillfully because the got all the people singing and
the conductor even if it is a bit blurry.for instante we see this when the camera is showing
everyone in the room.the director did this to show all the tribes working together as one.
the effect of this was to make the audience think that everyone can work together.
this can be compared to pk teaching the blacks english.

The film aspect close up was used brilliantly to show the pain of Pete.
For example we see this when the camera shows the guards and Pete face it shows
that the guard has beaten Pete the director did this to show emotion and feelings these
include hurt and pain and feeling like u want to help pete.This made the audience feel
scared for quell Pete.This aspect can be compared to pk been beating up by the bully
at the boarding school.

what am i learning:i am learning to write a really good essay paragraph.
how dose this show my learning:i have written two examples of sexxy paragraph.
what am i wondering:how many paragraphs is there going to be in this essay.